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I think for now it's the best one, only one thing perhaps it may be better change color, instead of yellow give a darker color, then white color around letters will no blend with yellow :) just my opinion and I apologize for my english if it's poorly written

RogueRobot responds:

I get you. And right now the background is just a stand in. But to fix the problem you're saying I could just move the colors around so yellow won't be a problem. I don't feel like dealing with trying to edit a submission on newgrounds and that isn't much of a change to warrant it's own submission so I'll just take that into consideration if I'm picked as the winner. If not, don't worry about it. Thanks for the feedback.